Monday, April 15, 2013

WRITING: Eve's kidnapping



2:05 pm
It was raining. One of those hard steady rains that soaks you to the bone. The man stood patiently on the sidewalk among the other parents and guardians waiting to pick up their children. He wore jeans and a t-shirt with a waterproof hoodie and carried a medium sized black umbrella, for all the help it did. The wind was strong, spraying him sideways with drops of cold water. The mechanical ding of the afternoon bell could be heard over the loud speakers, announcing the end of the school day at Beachside Elementary. Classroom doors swung open and a mass of children raced into the hallways each headed toward some unknown destination. The man looked around, surfing through the crowd for an open opportunity. That one, he thought, spying a red-headed girl whose back was facing him. He started in that direction, when she suddenly turned and ran toward a woman calling her name. He swiftly turned around. Realizing he was now too close to the inside of the school, he backed off and changed his direction, toward the opposite side where the playground and sports complex sat. A few stragglers were running between the open gates, trying to dodge the rain as it fell, but none of them held his attention. Ignoring them, he made his way further into the back of the school, and that’s when he saw her. A lone girl. Maybe nine or ten, standing with her bike held up against a small concrete building, perhaps the bathroom for the open concession stand. She looked like she was trying to escape the weather by standing under what little rim the building offered, but it wasn’t doing much good. She was drenched and shaking, and didn’t seem to be going anywhere. She was perfection and he had to have her.
He joined her, offering up the umbrella as a conversation starter. “Here,” he said. “This may help some.”
She looked up at him, big green eyes red-rimmed and scared. “Aww, sweety. What’s wrong? Why are you out here all alone?”
She pointed to her bike. “The front wheel is flat. I don’t want to leave the bike here or my mom will get mad if someone steals it.”
“You hold this,” he handed her the umbrella. “And I’ll take a look at it.” He bent down, rain pounding on his back and took hold of the tire. When he stood back up, he nodded. “Yep. It looks like you have a piece of glass bottle stuck in it. It’s letting all the air out.”
Her face scrunched up and she started to cry again. “I can give you a ride if you need me to take you somewhere.”
She didn’t know how to respond. Her mother always told her never to talk to strangers, but it was wet and cold and he seemed really nice.
“I don’t know,” she said, unsure of what to do.
“It’s okay. I was just here waiting to pick up my brother, Josh, from little league.”
“Josh?” the girl, asked, recognition filling her face. “Joshua Loman?”
“Yeah,” the man said, going along with it. “But I wouldn’t want to go with a stranger, either. You’re a smart girl.” He turned around, as if he was going to leave when a flash of lightning hit the sky and seconds later thunder came booming down around them.
Her eyes widened and she called after him. “Wait!” She had made her decision. “I guess if your Josh’s brother, you can’t be all bad.”
He smiled. “Come on. Let’s get your bike into the truck and I’ll give you a lift. If you were riding your bike you can’t be very far from here?”
“Just a couple of blocks over,” she admitted. “I always go straight home after school so my mother doesn’t worry.” She was much more relaxed now, thinking he was the nice big brother of her friend from school, and they almost ran to escape the rain, her holding the umbrella as he swiftly pushed the bike by its handles.
    They scurried back out into the parking lot where there were still a few people roaming about, everyone seemingly too preoccupied with their own doings to notice a little blond girl voluntarily getting into a big black F-250. He hurtled the small bike into the bed and clicked the unlock button on the key remote. She pulled herself up into the seat and pulled the door closed. As it clicked shut, she turned to put on her seatbelt. Her mom always taught her safety first. Before she knew what was happening, the man forced a sweet smelling cloth over her nose and mouth. She jerked her head back and forth, but that only made him press down harder. A woozy sensation washed over her as her hearing started to fade out and within seconds she was unconscious.

Sunday, April 14, 2013

PLOT: witness turned victim

You witness an abduction/killing in progress. You call 911, but decide to try to keep up with them until the police can step in. Manage to help catch the guy. Now, "x" amount of years later, the killer has been released/escaped from prison and you are number one on his new "To Do:" list.

Saturday, April 13, 2013

DREAM:

Everything was white. As in blinding, flash, entire world of emptiness white, the way dreams are sometimes. And then, suddenly, it was like there was a small window in the white that showed a black storm zooming in and in.

[credit:] steelblue71 @NaNoWriMo

CHARACTER: twin sisters Pepper & Bee

Name: Penelope Cotton
Nickname: Pepper
Age: 14-15
Personality: Pepper is sweet, friendly and immature. She's very idealistic and expects the world to be fair. She's the older twin, but she is treated like a baby most of the time. She loves art, especially sculpting. Pepper also enjoys cooking, which she is spectacularly bad at, and has a penchant for adding far too much spice. She's a little naive and relies on her sister for a lot of things.
Appearance: Pepper has shoulder-length curly blond hair and blue eyes. She's about 5"5 and wears bright colors with paint-splattered jeans and is almost always smiling.

Name: Beatrice Cotton
Nickname: Bee (family only)
Age: 14-15
Personality: Beatrice is the responsible twin. She's a little resentful of Pepper for needing so much looking after and making friends so easily. Beatrice struggles to trust people, loves jazz music, and gets reasonable grades without doing much studying. She mostly focuses on looking after other people, and always thinks things through.
Appearance: Beatrice has short curly blond hair which is always tied in an inch-long ponytail, a heart-shaped face and blue eyes. She loves skinny jeans.

History: When they were two, their mother left to travel the world. Their father was heartbroken. Growing up, their aunt (their mother's sister) was their mother figure. Recently their father has started dating again, which Pepper and Beatrice are not happy about.

[Credit:]  StrawberryFields@NaNoWriMo

Friday, April 12, 2013

SYNOPSIS: Storyline 1 - Eve





I have been looking for a very long time for a main back story that allowed me to have a variety of fantasy "beings" (for lack of a better term) in a modern day world. However, as the final outcome is going to be based on a combination of several different story lines I need help bringing everything together. I have so many aspects of this world that I highly doubt it'll be contained to one "novel", but I plan on branching it out into a series of events that end in an ultimate showdown with the Big Bad (ie: the Demon King). The whole basis starts with him in the very beginning and weaves its way through various other characters (some human, some not so much) and ultimately ends with either his resurrection or his permanent fatality.


[credit:] Dervish98 @ NaNoWriMo for creating the actual Demon King.
Just to give you a basic idea, mine is in a world where everything & its brother exists unknown to humans. So there is a lot of fantasy potential but in a mostly modern setting. I will have a ton of stories going on that will eventually come together when they're against the Big Bad, so to speak. Right now, I'm focusing on the first main character's story. (A millennium ago, 4 powerful supernatural humans (the Elders?) united to defeat a Demon King. They couldn't ultimately defeat him, but they were able to contain him. Now its present day and one of the Demon's immortal lackeys has been searching for a way to bring him back. [[I was thinking maybe the demon would be a body jumper: his soul can live forever as long as he escapes the human body he chooses before it dies or he'd be trapped in death]] 4 Descendants of the (Elders) hold the key. Each has a (talisman?) that as long as they stay separated, the Demon King will be "contained". But if the four are combined, it will release him into the world again. So the demon, upon finally discovering this, is after the 4 descendants to kill and take each of their (talismans?) So now, I'm back to present day and the telling of each individual descendants story.

I'm starting with Eve. She lives in Daytona Beach, is studying to become a vet and is actually working as a Vet's assistant at the Beach Walk Vet Clinic. When she was 5(ish) she was kidnapped but was saved/escaped(?) and returned to her home. [[she is going to somehow be saved by a wolf which actually ends up being a human shape-shifter who has been watching her since she was born]] She doesn't remember much about what happened and the doctors said she may never regain memories of the traumatic event. They never caught the guy, but its been years and now she's grown up. One day, she bumps/runs(?) into someone and something about their scent triggers a flashback of when she was kidnapped and she knows without a shadow of a doubt that this person was her kidnapper. But whoever it is either doesn't recognize her because it's been so long OR doesn't realize she suddenly remembers. At this point, I'm going to bring the wolf back into her life [[I was thinking either someone could hit it with their car and bring it into the vets clinic where she is and she has to take care of it or she, herself, hits it one night in a situation. There's just something about it's eyes that catches her and she ends up bringing it home to tend to, obviously not knowing that its human(?).]]  So now, wolf-boy needs to be introduced into her story somehow without her yet knowing that wolf and man are one and the same. ALSO, here's another kicker: she is a healer. But she hasn't come into her powers yet, doesn't even know she has them, so those will have to start coming into play soon, also. 



Now, we've come full circle to where she recognizes her kidnapper and the wolf is now actively in her life as a human, instead of watching from the sidelines like he has been. 


[sidenote:] Her best friend & roommate is a bartender at a bar/club down the street from their house. They are staying in a beach house that is actually Eve’s parent’s vacation home, but since she is attending that college, she & her best friend, Ryssa Grannan, are living there in the interim. There is a bouncer, Scott Peterson who comes into play also. He is very close with both girls & is protective of them. I was thinking he had a thing for Eve who also comes in all the time to see Ryssa. Ryssa is tall, tan with short super straight reddish/black hair. She's a do what she wants, say how she feels whether you like it or not type. Knows how to work a crowd and all the guys LOVE her. She's flirty and adventurous. Scott is more of your hometown country boy. He was raised on a farm in a horse town a couple of cities over. He's not overtly tall, but what he lacks in height he more than makes up for in muscle mass. He always wears a cowboy hat & boots and when he's not wearing the official bouncer t-shirt, he wears a long sleeve button up tucked into his skin tight wranglers. He drives a beat up truck and Ryssa drives a Mitsubishi eclipse. Besides the wolf-man, those are the only two solid characters I have. I need to have one or two more humans as well as fantasy characters that can help her along the way, too.
 

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

PROMPT:

On a day that started like any other, your friends and family have started to treat you a bit strangely and you suspect that something is up. On a whim, you stay out a bit later then curfew. When you return your house is surrounded by police cars.

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: animals can talk?

You are taking your dog for a walk when he starts talking to you. In fact, all the animals in the world have just become extremely conscious and have begun talking to you. What's up with that?

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: One day to live

You have been given one day to live. Detail it from beginning to end.

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: suddenly a celebrity

A series of events has made you a target of the paparazzi and one of the world’s most sought after celebrities. How did this happen and how are you dealing?

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: alter your past

The opportunity arises to go back in time and alter one event. What event do you alter? Describe your encounter from the past and its consequences in the present.

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: dead relative at door

You answer your doorbell and you are surprised to see your grandfather standing in the doorway. Mostly because he’s dead. He says, “I have some important things to tell you.” Talk about your reaction and what happens next.

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: wedding ring

You go to work the morning after a long night of drinking. You notice a cheap wedding ring on your finger that wasn’t there yesterday. Describe your action steps to determine what happened.

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: passing out

As you are walking down the street, you hear loud sirens. Before you can figure out the reason, you see a giant flash of light and you pass out. You wake up in a giant pile of rubble. What has happened and where do you go from here?

[creidt:] Bryan Cohen

PROMPT: 5 yr old

You wake up to find yourself in your five-year-old body and back in time. How do you spend your first 24 hours in this situation?

[credit:] Bryan Cohen

PLOT BABY: twin separation

MC was in the middle of doing some every day act when suddenly they felt this unbearably horrific pain that couldn't be explained. They haven't heard from their twin since and know something must have happened and that's what that feeling had to do with.

SETTING: speed dating

Speed Dating

Sunday, April 7, 2013

CHARACTER: serial killer

A serial killer who takes the identity of their victims. Has lived so long in other people's lives that theirs is a distant memory.

PLOT: high school queen of the underworld

Cassie has an awesome boyfriend. Or so she thinks... Turns out he's a demon overlord in the Underworld out to make Cassie his Queen. Another guy at school comes in the picture. Galen, who is actually Cassie's guardian angel to keep her safe. The Overlord will have to sacrifice Cassie to send her soul to hell before he can make her his Queen.

[credit:] I think I got this from NaNoWriMo, but I didn't write it down for some reason

PLOT: kidnapping as children, killing as adults

FMC was kidnapped when she was little. Somehow escapes. Now she's all grown up and they never caught the guy. She thinks she sees him at some random store. Does she go to police? Or does she just leave it alone thinking he'd never recognize her even if they were face to face? or does she try to take it in her own hands and go directly after him?

** Could tie in with the other plot I had: killer was kidnapping little kids and tattooing/branding them then sending them home. Now, after all this time, he is on a mission to track them down one by one and finish the game he started.

PLOT BABY: adoption

A woman gives up baby for adoption. 20 years later, her son/daughter sets off in search to find its birth mother.


Possible backstory:
* A spoiled selfish 17 yr old leaves baby on the side of the road in a box, thinking nothing of it and that the animals would take care of it. A magical group (?) finds it & implants magic into the baby before setting it off into the real world to be adopted. [ @ NaNo ]

PLOT BABY: stuck in snow

In an attempt to drive somewhere for New Years, the car gets stuck in a snowstorm. Not exactly sure where they are, MC pulls off an exit to wait it out at a diner. The snow gets worse & MC is, in effect, stranded.

PLOT: visions of murder

FMC has dream of murder. Thinks nothing of it until she sees the body on the news the next morning. Freaks out, but life goes on. Then, has another dream. Decides to go to police this time even though she knows they are going to laugh at her. They do. Until they find the second body. Then she is suddenly the main suspect. DNA the same or similar somehow? She is in custody when they find the third body. Find out she's seeing through the eyes of a twin sister she didn't even know she had.

PLOT: Stalker

- Beach (ish)

- Works @ a Bar/club/restaurant as a singer? dancer? waitress?

- 1st: one of the patrons that comes in often & has a thing for MC is killed. They find his body on the beach. (dont realize at this point that it has anything to do with her)

- starts getting weird presents? goes to police but they can't/don't do anything. (first meets Detective)

- 2nd: boyfriend gets attacked? Nothing serious so he leaves her. (Detective takes a more keen interest but still doesn't have anything solid to go on)

- 3rd: best friend/roommate gets killed? Detective comes into the picture more permanently, starts to protect her.

Come to find out it's female bartender at work. She's obsessed with MC (love? or friendship?) wants to get everyone close to MC away from her so its just the two of them.

PLOT: life lesson

MC has a near death experience in first chapter. ... then follows the rest of the story. Come to find out the MC never woke up in beginning and the rest is (whatever experience you decide). MC is still in a coma and this is all a dream. So when he wakes up, the whole thing becomes a life lesson. He needs to change his life or it'll end up just like his comatose dream.

PLOT: magic time capsule

Something weird happens to FMC on her birthday. When she turns 18/21 (?) she finds a time capsule (or something) buried by her mother that is filled with all sorts of magic things passed down from generation to generation. Finds out that there are others she was supposed to meet up with. They were all born on same day/same time and are part of a major fight for survival against the ultimate bad.

I picture her as a witch. Not sure if the "others" are all witches, too, or if they have their own story as a separate entity (warlock, shape-shifter, vampire, etc..)

Saturday, April 6, 2013

IDEAS: wiki/google

4 horsemen:

Red- War
Black - Famine
White - Conquest
Green - Death

SUPPLIES:

Alternate uses for things & good things to have on hand in the event of an apocalypse:

  • condoms - they can carry water/gas
  • syphon
  • metal coathangers - bend into shapes
  • aluminum foil - bend into bowls, wrap over meat & throw in fire, mold into a funnel, etc...
  • fish antibiotics - can be found in most general stores
  • clove oil - absessed tooth
  • washboard - for laundry, etc...
  • vodka - to warm you, numbs pain, clean & disinfect wounds

FEAR: becoming his father

"that the sins of the father will visit the son.." - in other words, he's scared he'll become a [insert psychotic deed here] like his father.

CHARACTER TYPE: wishmaster

Wishmaster:  has the ability to grant wishes

CHARACTER TYPE: werewolf

Werewolf: can transform into a wolf. Also have the ability to speak to wolves over either a short OR long distance.

CHARACTER TYPE: shape-shifter

Shape-shifter: has the ability to shift into anything

CHARACTER TYPE: dragonkin

Dragonkin: Sprouts 2 wings of silver feathers for flight and can spit/breathe fire